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Hi I'm SS, and welcome to my humble bio! I'm a 19 year old girl with a love for Rurouni Kenshin and a passion for writing. I despise poor grammar and spelling in writing. A work as such should be polished so that it is enjoyable for a reader to read. It's not as though I become annoyed when once in a while there is a small spelling or grammatical mistake that is obviously connected to a typo or a momentary lapse of intelligence, such as using "there" instead of "their" in a context such as "This is their dog." I'm not out to criticize or anything of the sort and I will not flame you when I review. I don't judge stories by their pairings. I constructively criticize to in order to help the author by giving my advice in context to changes that could be made in the story. I would like to humbly thank my reviewers kawaii_meeh and Universal Fighter. Your comments are valued and will help me in my future writings. I'm open to conversations and if anyone is interested in contacting me, you can reach me at my email address: firstname.lastname@example.org, AIM: SStheSockNapper, or MSN: Supersheba@gmail.com. Thank you for your time, and feel free to contact me anytime you have any questions!
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Date: 05/07/2005 Title: Chapter 1: ...and another one is issued...
I love this! It's absolutely excellent! Aoshi was fine. He was trying to do something important and he was getting interrupted. Even the ice block himself would go crazy if stuff like that kept interrupting him. Good job!
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Date: 04/03/2005 Title: Chapter 1: n/a
That's a nice poem. It looks odd to me though. Every line should be capitalized in most poetry and I think your poem falls into that category. It doesn't matter that Sentences have not ended. It's just the way it is and will give your poem a better look and feel.
Other than that, great job!
-SS(Contact me at email@example.com if you have any questions)
Author's Response: Thanks I really do say this a bit much but I love hearing all the things my readers have to say. So thanks once again! -Ria_san:9