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Reviewer: Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2012 02:26 AM Title: Kaoru! Kidnapped! Edited!

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Reviewer: None Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 03:57 PM Title: Kaoru! Kidnapped! Edited!

Very well done! write more.

Reviewer: None Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 03:57 PM Title: Kaoru! Kidnapped! Edited!

Very well done! write more.

Reviewer: None Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 03:56 PM Title: Kaoru! Kidnapped! Edited!

Very well done! write more.

Reviewer: None Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 03:56 PM Title: Kaoru! Kidnapped! Edited!

Very well done! write more.

Reviewer: royal blueKitsune Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 05:00 PM Title: Kaoru! Kidnapped! Edited!

I'm reviewing, I'm reviewing! The suspense is killing me already. *pouts* It just had to be a cliffie didn't it? And just when I was getting into the story...



Author's Response: srry!!! Seriously I was.....My compruter had spyware on it and i had 2 get it fixed!! I shall work on it right away...LOL

Reviewer: Aoshi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 09:23 AM Title: Kaoru! Kidnapped! Edited!

WOW. . .
It was . . . very intersesting



Author's Response: Are you sure Aoshi-sama?

Reviewer: Aoshi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 09:23 AM Title: Kaoru! Kidnapped! Edited!

WOW. . .
It was . . . very intersesting



Author's Response: you dont need to post it twice you know

Reviewer: goo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 05:59 PM Title: Kaoru! Kidnapped! Edited!

how did they hit kenshin? isn't he supposed to be amazing??

Author's Response: sryy like i said i have to update it LOL i guess i forgot to add that detail thanx 4 respondin' ill change it as soon as my computa becomes better its slowaa than molasess

Author's Response: sryy like i said i have to update it LOL i guess i forgot to add that detail thanx 4 respondin' ill change it as soon as my computa becomes better its slowaa than molasess

Author's Response: sryy like i said i have to update it LOL i guess i forgot to add that detail thanx 4 respondin' ill change it as soon as my computa becomes better its slowaa than molasess

Reviewer: unknown to all Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2005 01:49 AM Title: Kaoru! Kidnapped! Edited!

This story is a bit confusing to me. Going from one place to another, and its not really making sense. It has a great story plot, but should be written a bit more clearly. But do not get me wrong I like your story, but just not the way you wrote it.

Author's Response:

Thank You, I was going to change it I really was, but I have no time. I'll make it longer and change it alot. Thanx, Maybe we can be friends,

Jin

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